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I call it Cacturo and the Blue Man Group.
Help! I must enter this womb before the Phoenix has a golden shower on me.
In all seriousness, the little guy at the bottom is my favorite part.
Help! I must enter this womb before the Phoenix has a golden shower on me.
In all seriousness, the little guy at the bottom is my favorite part.

I like the whole symbolic take on the style here; I think it matches the tone of the story very well. Your silhouettes are very well done, although it is a little funny how the Phoenix is the only object that gets an outline. I wonder if this is intentional, and what it means. One more thing I'd like to note is that this piece is kind of sparse in information-density, I can't help but think that making the canvas size a little smaller and having everything a little closer together might help reduce some of the negative/blank space.
Thank you for arting!
Thank you for arting!