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Reversal of Fortune · FiM Short Story ·
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the reversal of Fortune
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#1 ·
· · >>CoffeeMinion
I'm going to assume this guy has an Irish accent because stereotypes are the best.

This picture's got great style. I'm not caught up on the show so I'm not sure if we're supposed to know who this is? But still, I like his design a lot. My only critique is that his right hooves are a little lumpy, which contrast with the straight-edges that are his left hooves.

Good work!
#2 · 1
>>Miller Minus
Naw, I'm pretty sure this is an OC, not a canon character. (Though I still need to catch up on a couple of S8 episodes from mid-season... but I haven't seen this guy pop up elsewhere, either.)

Still though, very nice stuff here! Great comic-y style. I like how the slice of background is handled, as well as the pose and energy of our hero. I'd love to see what a fully-developed comic in this style would look like.
#3 ·
· · >>Rocket Lawn Chair
Decently drawn, with some traditional art that I'm sure is harder to work with. I'm not sure I grasp the concept though. Unless the pony here himself is "lucky" (and leaving the viewer?)
#4 · 1
Yeah, I think this is the embodiment of Fortune, in which case he's pulling a full reverse, forklift-style. Beep, beep, beep!