I had one of these. I suspect shoopery is at play. 6 of 10 POW points. Tempus fugit, Artist.

Wondering if there is a meta message or critique based on how well the story was written? Pretty sure the artist knows me well enough that I would like this a lot (or knows how easy going I pretend to be). Either way at the time of this post, not going to spoil it by asking too many questions. Yeah this photo shopped but I still like it a lot. Of course I would considering this is based off a story I wrote. Good job.

A simple premise executed cleanly. I think the only thing I'd suggest altering would be the movement/swoosh lines. The fact that they're connected to the hoofmark itself made me think for a moment that we're seeing the whole hoof and the leg. Making it so that not all of the lines fully connect with the lines of the hoofprint might better convey that these are motion lines. Other than that, though, I've got nothing to criticize.

Thanks for drawing!