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The Other Side · FiM Short Story ·
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#1 · 1
· · >>GroaningGreyAgony
My favorite part about this art is the tower. Here we have a great view of the world surrounding it and get an idea that a pony is inside it without the picture being too ‘in your face’ about it.

(I absolutely adore the little tic tacs that she makes omg)

Also, her cup is great
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And here is another race-to-the-finish entry.

Pros: I am in accord with >>dragon discord, Artist: the first panel with the tower is the best part of this piece. The composition highlights the height of the tower, and the forlorn black figure within hints at Cadence’s mood, while the globe of the world below emphasizes how remote and alone she is.The joke is amusing enough to justify the effort.

Cons: Then you run out of time and start scribbling a lot, and the figures suffer. Celestia is particularly awkward. (Cadence’s expression in the last panel, however, is a perfect rendition of frustration and anger.)

Despite the cons, you at least managed to finish the piece (and multi-panel comics do require more effort), which will push it higher in my rankings. I will place it as an upper-mid tier piece.