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Look, But Don't Touch · Original Short Story ·
Organised by RogerDodger
Word limit 2000–8000
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Sight and Sound
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#1 ·
The beauty and cruelty of virtual worlds, windows on realms of make believe that we can only pretend to touch... I feel her pain. Nice work on letting only the goggles and her tear be in color. My main advice is likely a repeat from earlier rounds; you should start practicing with using lines of varying widths, as these can lend more liveliness to your work. If your current drawing tool doesn't offer easy options for this, consider finding another.
Thanks for taking the effort to draw in a round dominated by photography!
#2 ·
I like the general shape of her face, here, but her hair and the visor do look a little flat. It's probably what GGA says about line widths, honestly, since I'm not really an artist, I'm just guessing. :P

Thanks for arting!