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It Could Have Gone Better · FiM Minific ·
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the heart of saturday night
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Good rendition of Pinkie, she looks worried. The background... maybe wasn’t necessary... maybe? It kind of detracts from the shadows, which I think are some of the strongest parts of this image, or any image dealing with sadness.
#2 ·
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I like this. Good job with pinkie’s emotion
#3 · 1
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NIce work with Pinkie's expression. There's a lot of complicated emotions that I can't quite put into words, and I really liked that her face is the only thing not in shadow. It feels stark and a little disconcerting. Nicely done!
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The expression is what sells this piece. The background is just too slapdash to carry much weight.