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It's a Long Way Down · Original Short Story ·
Organised by RogerDodger
Word limit 2000–8000
Together, Forever, Down The Hole We Fall
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#1 ·
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The longer I look at this the funnier it gets. A+ attention to detail.
#2 ·
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Good job on the detail, but I have to say it isn't terribly aesthetically pleasing.
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I suppose it was meant to be funny but it fell flat for me, I'm sorry but that will be a no. Moreover, I don't want to search for the clues you gave in the titles' tabs.
#4 ·
· · >>Ranmilia
You’re still using Windows XP? Automatic fail.

I’m sorry you didn’t get the prompt you wanted. The screenshot with tabs and edited prompts is mildly amusing, but since I also grade for artistic effort, this won’t be going far up my slate.
#5 ·
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Sigh. While it is certainly amusing, it ultimately falls flat.
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Frankly, it's the little details that make this. (lol 420 pm lol) The main window, which looks like the punchline, is just eye-roll-worthy at first glance, but digging into the context turns it funny. That said, I feel like with the surrounding tabs and programs, this would have been stronger if Twincest had been the only upthumbed vote.

In my voting, this will go above the other screenshot entry I reviewed (>>horizon) on the basis of all the little details being more rewarding to explore — though I don't know that it will rise significantly farther, and for similar reasons. Regardless, thank you for sharing.
#7 · 2
· · >>GroaningGreyAgony
"Anime was a mistake." - fake quote misattributed to Hayao Miyazaki

So yeah, I have no knowledge about or skill in the visual arts, this was a joke/prompt fodder entry (I'll save my thoughts on that for the conclusion of the round, if at all...) that took a few hours on an old computer to whip up. I tried to make it as trashy as possible! Seems that aspect didn't come across too well for everyone, though.

>>GroaningGreyAgony also did a very similar concept way better in this same round, good stuff there. I'm surprised that one didn't at least medal, I liked it. But congrats to the winners, thanks to the voters, and I hope people at least got a chuckle out of it!