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It's a Long Way Down · Original Short Story ·
Organised by RogerDodger
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i trusted you dave
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#1 ·
Man, the caption on this reminds me of early xkcd comics. I would have gone a bit more xkcd with it if that was in fact the intent.
#2 ·
A basic doodle of a basic concept. It may result in a story, so it has that going for it.
#3 · 1
Again, artist, my apologies: Artistically and compositionally ... what can I say? With low-res two stick figures and a bent line, I can't really evaluate it aesthetically so much as judge the effort of its assembly and its effectiveness in communicating its ideas. (It does so. Points for minimalism?)

I think this needs to be a little higher-res to succeed even at its modest goals, honestly. The figure at the top of the cliff is something of a blob. It took me reading the caption plus too much effort to realize that (the person who is presumably) Dave is standing in a Sparta-kick pose with foot outstretched.

Regardless, thank you for sharing!