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It Could Have Gone Better · FiM Minific ·
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The Blue Haywaiian
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You put the draino in the coconut and woa, woa, woa!
At least it has an umbrella.
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· · >>Super_Trampoline
Thank you so much for the art!! I'm kinda glad you decided to draw one of the coconut drinks, since that was probably the bit that I enjoyed writing the most. :)

I do like that you left the inside of the coconut white, for the flesh. But this white does wash out against the background, which is the same color (or almost the same; can't quite tell). I'd suggest giving the background a yellow or orange tinge, to contrast with the blue and pink and help the white pop out.
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A simple doodle. The umbrella stem blends into the coconut. I’ve not much else to say.
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· · >>Bachiavellian
>>Bachiavellian
Did you notice the scrollover text?
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>>Super_Trampoline
I actually did not, because I'm dumb. But that's pretty cool! I don't mix a lot of drinks, but the next time I've got the chance, I'll give this a shot. :)