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Separate Ways · She-Ra Short Story ·
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#1 · 2
· · >>No_Raisin
This is lovely. Look at them, they're so content and comfortable. And yes. It is very gay.
Even though I feel you could've had more intensity on some areas, I love the shading in the drawing. Using markers certainly helped.
Now, I won't grill you for the blank background; however, I wonder if it could've been used more efficiently. Just by itself, the negative space makes you focus on the central elements. And even though Entrapta and Catra are farily centered on the image as a whole, the focal point are their heads and intertwined fingers (lewd, btw), and those happen on the left half of the picture, meaning that the right half leaves a lot of unexploited space. Simply moving it around a bit would've solved this. Work on your framing and your drawings will improve significantly.
Also, this is just nitpicking, but it bothers me how both Catra and Entrapta are centered in the picture except for the end of Entrapta's hair. Oh, and she should also get some ice for her broken foot.
Regardless, this a great drawing, and one of my favourites this round. I'll be sure to rank it highly.
#2 · 2
On the scale from 1 to 10 in terms of homoeroticism, this almost beats Top Gun.

I guess Entrapta's hair would be pretty cozy. This is generally a cozy pic. I don't remember Catra's freckles being this pronounced? And Entrapta's face is a bit too squished. Also, as >>Zaid Val'Roa said, it'd be nice to have some kind of background here. Actually, if this had its foreground combined with the background of "We Belong Here," you'd have a pretty dope entry.

But this does help satisfy my weekly gay shit quota. Thanks, artist.
#3 · 2
This is hella adorable. Especially Catra's expression, which communicates so much serenity. It's not the sort of picture which invites interpretation, so I won't do that.

I suspect you already know this, but the biggest weakness here is anatomy. And two people cuddling does make for some hellishly complex anatomy, so to be fair, bravo for having the ambition to attempt it.