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Step into my world · Poetry Minific ·
Organised by Anon Y Mous
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No World Now
Welcome puny beings
Happy to see you here
You couldn't stay away
Come for some sightseeing

Your little mud, your small home
Speck in a black ocean
With all the nice comforts
Not while now you roam

Metal cans not freeing
Cosmic rays, dirt sheer
So many ways to slay
Welcome small, brave beings
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I had trouble figuring out what was going on here. Some omniscient narrator talking to mankind? It seemed like it might be an alien tour guide, but then some of the language seems to be welcoming back humans who hadn't been there in a while. I also can't tell whether the speaker is deriding humans for their fallacies and illusions, or is praising them for bravely taking on the trials of living. overall, somewhat confusing.