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The Hopeful Step · Poetry Minific ·
Feeling It Out
One by one
Words rise into place
To imprint the white void
Like stones emerging through the mist
Just under the traveler's feet
To validate their chosen path.
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Pascoite
Pascoite
#1 · 1
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Kind of a meta thing about storytelling, I guess? A bit of a structural puzzle. Each line is one word longer than the previous until it backs off to 5 again and stays there, but I don't know if that's deliberate. At first, it seemed to be thematic with the first couple of lines.
Corinna
Corinna
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On first read this was a pleasant thought and a fitting metaphor, and pretty much just that. But it keeps growing on me.
Gotta type this comment slowly to really savor the image.
Aw, done already :c