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The Vase in the Woods
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36th
27%
31
What We Did Last Night
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Secure, Contain, Pony
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Eolotthowghrhoighuay
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The Picture In the Back Room
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To Be Free
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De Morte Machina
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One Shot to Save the World
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The Day I Met my Double
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A Little Story
#12469 · 5
· · >>Hagdal Hohensalza >>DuskPhoenix
And I'm in writing shape for this one, huzzah! I will beat all of you and secure 19th place!
#21257 · 5
· · >>Zaid Val'Roa >>MLPmatthewl419
I'm gonna take a picture of a google doc for the pic portion, and draw a story in pictoglyphs for the fic portion .-.
#10628 · 3
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*looks at prompt, sees all of her ideas die, cries.*

In slightly more serious news, rip me.
#6996 · 2
· on Pardon My Friends · >>The_Letter_J
Okay. That was cute. Nice little fluffy oneshot that made me chuckle. I would have preferred more plot stuff, as the story really has nothing to stand on other than a pun.
#6999 · 2
· on Post Metamorphosis
I didn't really get anything from reading this. Only mild confusion as to why their memory is so flaky. The monologue doesn't give us anything more than what you would get from looking at the napoleon deer bugs. We already have these questions, answers would have made the story infinitely more interesting.
#6997 · 1
· on After Party · >>007Ben
The characterization feels really forced. The conflict tries it's best to convince you this could actually happen, but it just doesn't match up with what we've seen of Pinkie Pie. Interesting concept, but the execution fell a bit flat.
#7002 · 1
· on Keep Wanting · >>FrontSevens
The story touched me, but thats it. It's too disconnected and has so few details. You touch a tiny bit on both characters backstories, leaving us with more questions than answers. The characterization is off as well, feeling slightly forced. I don't see the need for Violet to be there, she was distracting from the plot, used a conflict generator.

It would have given a much bigger impact if we weren't trying to piece together all the left out details
#7003 · 1
· on Entering and Breaking · >>KwirkyJ
The story unfortunately put me off. The conflict is sound. The characterization is good. It would have moved me, bt there's the alcohol.

Trading one addiction for another is not the way to go about helping someone. Changing the vice doesn't fix the problem.

Personally, that killed this story for me. Without it, prolly would have been in top three on slate.
#7009 · 1
· on Happily Ever After* · >>Trick_Question
Great story, very well done, very touching.
#7014 · 1
· on A Good Filly
Very interesting. A nice view on the aftermath of abuse.