Another one comes, and I have a good general idea of what I want to write, just hope that the prompts that I like are chosen. Also, I'm really feeling it, and I hope that I can advance back up to the top, or at least into the second round.

Also, whoever wrote in, Where the Heart Lies, I feel like that it's the title to my own story on Fim. Not sure if by accident or inspiration, I thank you good sir and or madam. :)

Oh man I got so distracted. I wasted a whole day yesterday thinking on what I wanted to do but instead drew a blank. Then today I had my idea and I was going into it but I got distracted by other deals and now I might have to sit this one out. I got such a good idea too. I was hoping to share it with you all. (and probably get criticized becasue the story was not well done when only I care on the substance of the story.) But, other than that, hopefully I can try next time.

Good luck to you all.

~Broman

By the way, once the competition is over, is it still possible to submit the story for the contest entry after its all over?

Have an idea down, but only one day to finish. I can do this.

~Broman

*looks at title*

The Darkest Hour.

*Looks back at audience*

I am intrigued.

Hello Everyone. So I guess it shows that I am the one who made the story, A New Beginning. When I was making it I was watching that video that everyone has been talking about. I was inspired by it and I thought doing it like this would have worked. I guess now that it didn't do so well in the polling but at least I gave it try. I know it was better then the time I made that story that was the Heineken James Bond reenactment that I did. Anyway I thought I did good, maybe my writing needs more tuning or I need to slow down and flesh out the details, even though I had three days to get the idea in my head and write it done. Well anyway my story is done and now it shall be shipped off to a worthy editor.

I like to thank everyone that had reviewed my story and gave it there honest opinion, which a lot of it was on the construction of the story and the technical side of things; seems I would never win on that front. Though I would like to thank Cold In Gardez for praising me on that part, the having the idea and going with it plan. I really appreciate that and that really helped me out because I really believe the story to be a winner if not at least get into the second half of the competition. I will try to flesh out this story and try to get some editors to look into this.

That is all everyone and good luck to you all in the second half of the finals. I got a story to edit.

~Broman

So I just did a quick check through and there are still stories that need to be checked. I think anything below five should get another review at least before the round is over.

And with that that comes to the end of my entries. I hope they were fair and balanced and that everyone understood what I had said. I hope my story gets the same common courtesy and gets reviewed based on content and story instead of the critical grammar issues within. I believe I did well with my work and actually writing more into my own draft from the suggestions that have been made and I hope it gets up there in the polls.

Otherwise, if it doesn't, I can still send it to anyone who is an editor here and can dissect it and cross stitch it back up and make it better once again.

Good luck to the rest of you and I can't wait for the end result. :)

Entry Number 25, File Code Name, Saved by the Bell

This story was really good, one of my favorites out of all of the entries. Taking place with Sunset moving on from Graduation and deciding what she can do in the future, but both Princess Celestia and their counterparts in the human world, are together and guide her through this and help her discover what she can do in the future. I really enjoy this the most and I know people may disagree but I did enjoy reading this work.

Entry Number 13, File Code Name Slingshot

This story didn't seem to fit with me. I get it that it is on a whole idle of sci-fy and heavily on travel in the galaxy deal, and with the fact that Twilight and her Immortal status along with the other princesses. But it just didn't settle with me compared to the other stories that I have read. Don't get me wrong it was an interesting read, just didn't suit me is all.

Entry number 2, File Code Name, Writer's Sin

I don't know why people assume this story to be bad, in fact, I really enjoyed it. The whole thing kind of reminds me of a certain episode from the series and it even strikes on par with friendship lessons. I do enjoy the subtle moments between both Celesita and Twilight, they do act as if they were mother and child.

Entry number 28, File Code Name, The Yo Mama Mandate

Now this was a funny story to read. It had it's funny moments and bits that would seem outlandish but with Pinkie Pie in the midst it did lead to a fun trip throughout the story. The ending felt a little weak and it should have hit on a high note. Other than that I say the story turned out well.

Entry number 6, File Code Name, The Day the God of Time Stopped by for Tea

I was very skeptical about this one. Turns out I was more confused at the end at what this story was or how it came about. It jumbled from place to place and it really didn't make sense to me in some places. The killer mood for me, literately, was at the end. I won't say that you caused a few raised eyebrows, dear writer, but to me, I just don't like seeing something that ghastly to a beloved character.

Entry number 16, File Code Name, Harmony is Clockwork.

This story starts a little differently then normal but I do enjoy reading the ending bit. It takes place in the mythos of Equus's past and delves into some mysteries surrounding the elements of Harmony. Despite some of the dialogue I did enjoy reading about how this all came to be. Maybe having more tone and detail surrounding the mythos of these characters will add rich story elements to it.

Entry number 14, File Code name, One

Though this story has some interesting moments the dialogue didn't feel like it gave enough punch. There was different times where I wasn't sure which dialogue to follow and it came off wired to me. In the end the story had a few interesting points such as how Queen Chrysalis is tricking her drone into a false sense of security and whatnot but I think with a bit of extra work it would make for an interesting fic.

Hello Everyone. If you are reading this, this means that, and I quote, "I'm back!" :D

I already had story in the works and I believe it worked really well with this prompt. I already submitted it and I can't wait for you all to read it. I know it might not get views but I hope that I will get a good response for it. Took me all three days to make it and I am happy with the result. Take care everyone and I will see you again soon.

~Broman.

Awe man I think I might sit this one out. School is keeping me busy and finals are happening tomorrow. I had something but with my time constraint and with school projects building up I will have no choice but to comply.

Anyway good luck with everyone, hope this works out for you all.

Alright I got an idea brewing, not sure what will come of it but it will be something. See you all in a few days.

Alright I did my vote. Can't see what comes out of this prompt.

>>horizon
There is also the possibility that the notification on the Wrtieoff Association page on Fim has not been made known. I happen to know this by chance just by checking the date.

Alright. Can't wait to get into this writeoff. Look forward to getting into writing again!

>>QuillScratch Thanks for that. Actually having comments on your stories does sound better then looking at a reviews on the Fim page and having to scroll through long explanations. Thanks for notifying me of that.

So we are no longer commenting on the main page on Fim then and having discussion here? Or will the reviews be done on the main page on Fim and not here?

Don't get me wrong the comment system is interesting here, but I just need to understand with the new rules in all. Can someone care to explain please?

Also can't wait with the new round on Fim. Can't wait to see which prompt will be chosen. :)