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Exposure to Syeekoh has had previous cases of loss of virginity. ~Deepthroat
Also as a comment on this story, it uses far too much real estate on the end of magical mystery cure, then drops an obscure metaphysical bomb on us near the end... which is apparently called solipsism in philosophical circles, but in a metaphysical sense, for those unaware, there's a concept where everyone is essentially part of a greater organism―in Judaism specifically, which I am intimately familiar with, the esoteric tradition holds that everything has a spark of the divine and we all came from the same metaphysical creature let's just say it gets super complicated okay?
But yeah it kind of drops this solipsistic/metaphysical bomb and... doesn't go anywhere with it. Like !Hat said, it introduces an idea without any real payoff, and from my experience a story needs a payoff, no matter how small the story.
I'll give you that it does end on a warm note, which is in line with what Twilight just learned.
But yeah it kind of drops this solipsistic/metaphysical bomb and... doesn't go anywhere with it. Like !Hat said, it introduces an idea without any real payoff, and from my experience a story needs a payoff, no matter how small the story.
I'll give you that it does end on a warm note, which is in line with what Twilight just learned.
>>Zaid Val'Roa
Funny story, actually.
My username was originally just Syeekoh, which is the time period when I made the writeoff account. The Majin was a later addition, and since writeoff scores are tied to usernames, creating a Majin Syeekoh handle using this account would start me off with a score of zero and I'm not really a fan of that idea.
I agree with >>Syeekoh (When did you drop the Majin?)
Funny story, actually.
My username was originally just Syeekoh, which is the time period when I made the writeoff account. The Majin was a later addition, and since writeoff scores are tied to usernames, creating a Majin Syeekoh handle using this account would start me off with a score of zero and I'm not really a fan of that idea.
>>CoffeeMinion
My impression about the prophecy is that it's incredibly vague, meaning that the end of equestria doesn't have to necessarily be a bad thing.
And my thoughts on why Twilight was mad was that Luna and Celestia thought that the prophecy meant that Equestria ending would be a bad thing, so they prepared Twilight for the worst. So she decided to go against that and turn Equestria into a better place―unwittingly fulfilling the prophecy by ending 'Equestria' as a pony-centered society and turning it into a far more integrated one.
My impression about the prophecy is that it's incredibly vague, meaning that the end of equestria doesn't have to necessarily be a bad thing.
And my thoughts on why Twilight was mad was that Luna and Celestia thought that the prophecy meant that Equestria ending would be a bad thing, so they prepared Twilight for the worst. So she decided to go against that and turn Equestria into a better place―unwittingly fulfilling the prophecy by ending 'Equestria' as a pony-centered society and turning it into a far more integrated one.
This was a good bit of fun, I'd have to admit. Just a fun little introduction to Sterling Rod and who he is.
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