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>>Pascoite
Thanks so much for the feedback! I've already reworked some of the weaker lines in my own version to strengthen the intended meaning, but I wouldn't have been able to see it without hearing from you. I appreciate your taking time to break down some of the areas that need work here.
Thanks so much for the feedback! I've already reworked some of the weaker lines in my own version to strengthen the intended meaning, but I wouldn't have been able to see it without hearing from you. I appreciate your taking time to break down some of the areas that need work here.