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I like what you're doing with the edges/foreground here, which kind of evokes that sense of tunnel vision one associates with loss of consciousness. The tub itself looks a little basic, but it gets the job done, as does the shading on the water, although there might be a little bit of a streamer-like feel to the flow. Thank you for arting!
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Do you have tub mold? Sunset does...

I kid, I kid. Actually I like this very much for the most part. The pseudo-melting tub gives this an unsettling aspect that's backed up by the weirdly moldy surroundings. The tub itself is plain, but there's enough going on for it to be mostly inoffensive.

The one thing that bugs me is the edges of the flowing water. The central part of it looks fine. But at the edges, you can see the crudely wiggly lines that the rest is composed of.

Still, compositionally, this works.