Hey! It looks like you're new here. You might want to check out the introduction.

Organised by Anon Y Mous
Word limit 15–1000
Show rules for this event
The Roads I Didn't Take
My ghosts took other ways.
I look out across the hills...
Their paths shine like moons.
« Prev   2   Next »
#1 ·
·
This looks like it's going to be a haiku, but the first line is too long. Free verse then? It doesn't have a meter or rhyme scheme. As to meaning, I assume these ghosts are the other possibilities of what else he could have done. I like the idea of that, but he expresses no feelings about whether those other paths were good or bad, so I'm left not knowing what mood to get from this.