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Original Minific
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Shan'wuy.ch
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FiM Short Story
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Roads
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Lavender
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Fridge
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True Ascension
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No End
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The Town
#10638 · 5
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Oh boy, just barely made the submission.

I am so going to get destroyed this round! Heh
#6668 · 4
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>>Posh
Oh crap. Completely forgot about that rule. Heh.

Oh well, doesn't matter. There's next time. What matters is that I got to write something.
#7149 · 2
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>>FanOfMostEverything
I'll participate when possible. I'm not exactly overflowing withfree time as of late. I'm fact, time is a severely short comodity. Still, it's writing that more or less keeps me sene. So, thanks for the kind words.

As for your suggestions. .. they give me an idea
#9439 · 2
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Some of the entries are pretty juicy this time 'round. A fine weekend to write too.
#3527 · 1
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'Bout time I tried to get back into the writing game. Been too long. Hell, glad there's an original fic story as well. Haven't been able to do much 'pone' stuff for a while. Magic's all gone, it seems.
#4589 · 1
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>>ZaidValRoa
Your idea was actually one of my first versions of this. Then I quickly realized that it was taking way too many words (the meeting alone went past 1k words). I had to scale this down massively. In truth, what was posted was maybe only 10% of the originally planned story.
#5482 · 1
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Yet another chance to spill out my organized nonsense.
#10854 · 1
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>>TheCyanRecluse
>>Not_A_Hat
>>Fenton
>>Monokeras
>>Ranmilia
Well, so much for being weird, heh. Maybe next time, I'll work out better.
#4585 ·
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>>Remedyfortheheart
Hey, thanks for the review. Sorry 'bout the late reply. Been busy.

And yes, I did kinda drop the ball towards the end, partially on account of the word limit, but mostly because I couldn't think of a better way to end the story based on where I had taken the narration. Had I had my way with things, I would have had the two characters interact via gestures and mental images that hinted at a grander conflict between the two, one that had gone on since time immemorial. I also would have dropped flashbacks to the main character's past lives in between the travel. So much I could have added to spice things up.

All in all, though, I think I really enjoyed writing this. Glad you liked the description parts, though. It's kind of what I pride myself in.
#4586 ·
· on Shan'wuy.ch · >>Not_A_Hat
>>Not_A_Hat
Had the word limit not been so short, you would have seen something far, far deeper. As is, I'm actually proud I managed to get out what I did with so few words.