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>>LoftyWithers yup, defo smells of ponies.
Maybe a frustrated and grieving Celestia immediately after the banishment?
I wonder why the fourth last line is not capitalised.
Not quite sure how the archer imagery fits into this narrative, though.
Song: Sun (duh).
Maybe a frustrated and grieving Celestia immediately after the banishment?
I wonder why the fourth last line is not capitalised.
Not quite sure how the archer imagery fits into this narrative, though.
Song: Sun (duh).
>>Anon Y Mous
Fuck, the moon rises gives so many /feels/
Chills especially. We should talk pony music on Discord sometime!
Fuck, the moon rises gives so many /feels/
Chills especially. We should talk pony music on Discord sometime!
Pfft. This one rolls off the tongue nicely.
But I agree with >>Anon Y Mous that the last stanza feels a bit weird.
https://ponyphonic.bandcamp.com/track/idioglossary ("wordses" pet theory: it's siblinguistic all the way down)
But I agree with >>Anon Y Mous that the last stanza feels a bit weird.
https://ponyphonic.bandcamp.com/track/idioglossary ("wordses" pet theory: it's siblinguistic all the way down)
Light futurist reading. I especially like the format. Sign me down as a fan.
Especially if there are ponies. There are ponies.
Considered one by one I found the haiku to be hit or miss; yet it didn't bother me much.
Especially if there are ponies. There are ponies.
Considered one by one I found the haiku to be hit or miss; yet it didn't bother me much.
Paging WIP