What I like about this piece in contrast with the other image for the same story is that Twilight is much smaller in comparison to her surroundings. It drives home that feeling of isolation I got while reading the story.

Alright, maybe it was a bit too small, but that contrast is interesting.

Artist, you've captured the feeling of loneliness at the edge of the world, with a touch of yearning for what may or may not be over the horizon, hinting at the choice yet to be taken. The execution feels a bit scribbly, and a second pass could improve this. I am placing this in the mid-upper tier.

This work really captures the feel of the story. Having Twilight be seen as so small, standing on the edge of the precipice. It hits all the right keys. Thank you for making such art.

Again, this isn't going to win any awards for the quality of its linework, being a pencil sketch with scribble shading, but what's here offers a clear glimpse of its intentions. The cliffsides are probably the strongest part of the piece, and I do appreciate how the little details of horn and tail shape make it pretty clear that the jumble of scrawls in the middle is Twilight Sparkle. The scribbles at the base of the cliff are evocative of waves crashing against the cliffs, but I really would have preferred a more even, unhurried pattern to the distant ocean shading. Take this from concept to less-hurried execution and I think you'll see future pieces rise significantly in the ratings. Thanks for submitting!