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Darkness Beyond Hope · Original Short Story ·
Organised by RogerDodger
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In Places Deep Where Dark Things Sleep
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#1 ·
There are a lot of fun details in this one, but my favourite is definitely the towels at the end. A slow scroll down the artwork tells a fun story of naiive heroism, then crushing reality, further horrors, and finally a soft landing and a comedic ending. I like it. The only thing I don't understand is the end of "line three", right after the crushing log trap. There appears to be some statues? Maybe an elevator? And a fan on the wall? And does something activate the trap door? It's not clear to me.

Favourite though. Love the creativity.