Okay, since it's been revealed who wrote this, I can finally comment about it.

I realize the story just sort of... ends and doesn't have a lot of resolution and I make no excuses for my poor writing on the matter. Hopefully, I can actually put in some legitimate conflict and depth to the whole thing. Still, the general response has been positive and I think you for that.

Let's see if I can pound this into a real story.

>>Trick_Question
Actually, the dictionary definition of sepulcher is just 'a place of burial'. So, while it may be more commonly used as you're saying here, this is a valid use of the term.

First write-off entry in a long time; let's see how people react to me.