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Wahhh did you steal this from Scropias desk :D?
lol, that was cute as fug id love to see more from Scorpias point of view, maybe this is a part of an introduction, a series of observations, Scorpiasdiary about Catra :D this could go places!
That would make for some good drawings!
lol, that was cute as fug id love to see more from Scorpias point of view, maybe this is a part of an introduction, a series of observations, Scorpiasdiary about Catra :D this could go places!
That would make for some good drawings!
Ouuuuh fluffy Glimmadora, i always think about characters psyche after such traumatic events, and how often nothing is explored further from what happened.
I wonder if glimmer holds any sort of trauma that may pop up later in the show.
My interpretation:
Its a glimpse in to the mind of Glimmer and how the event of her kiddnapping really messed with her mind, being perhaps the most sensitive of all characters, she was put against shadow Weavers torture, the kind of torture that marred Catra, imagine!
The word limit really hurt it to get stablished I could see this spawn a nice slow burn psycological story about Glimmer and her PTD, i havent seen many fics like these, and i remain hopeful that somehow in the end Adora and Glimmer over come the trauma with LOVE.. MNNHNHH YES im a fuggin softie Dx
I wonder if glimmer holds any sort of trauma that may pop up later in the show.
My interpretation:
Its a glimpse in to the mind of Glimmer and how the event of her kiddnapping really messed with her mind, being perhaps the most sensitive of all characters, she was put against shadow Weavers torture, the kind of torture that marred Catra, imagine!
The word limit really hurt it to get stablished I could see this spawn a nice slow burn psycological story about Glimmer and her PTD, i havent seen many fics like these, and i remain hopeful that somehow in the end Adora and Glimmer over come the trauma with LOVE.. MNNHNHH YES im a fuggin softie Dx
HAHAHAAH typical Seahwak <3
This one is short and sweet and i can see the STRUGGLE in Mermista, she truly gets not rest with Seahaw around lol
I would totally love to see this spin off into more adventures, and i am intrigued as to how Seahawk was able to be there on time, perhaps he had something to do? ooooh, the lengths he might go to swoon Mermista? hehe :p
This one is short and sweet and i can see the STRUGGLE in Mermista, she truly gets not rest with Seahaw around lol
I would totally love to see this spin off into more adventures, and i am intrigued as to how Seahawk was able to be there on time, perhaps he had something to do? ooooh, the lengths he might go to swoon Mermista? hehe :p
Wow this is so sad, alexa play Catracito
Ok for real this made me feel sad for Shadow Weaver, intrigued as what would be of her, why is she being tortured so overkill like this >w<
I feel theres soo many literary references that may have gone over my head, i wish the word limit wasnt there, cause im sure a little more could have been stablished, but the core of it all is setting up something big, why would the story focus on her who is supposed to rot away like this, this could be an amazing Shadow Weaver revenge story! it coudl go to VERY DARK places.
I still think Shadow Weaver has yet to play a huge role in the show, i feel like she will reddeem/sacrifice for the heroes :p
Ok for real this made me feel sad for Shadow Weaver, intrigued as what would be of her, why is she being tortured so overkill like this >w<
I feel theres soo many literary references that may have gone over my head, i wish the word limit wasnt there, cause im sure a little more could have been stablished, but the core of it all is setting up something big, why would the story focus on her who is supposed to rot away like this, this could be an amazing Shadow Weaver revenge story! it coudl go to VERY DARK places.
I still think Shadow Weaver has yet to play a huge role in the show, i feel like she will reddeem/sacrifice for the heroes :p
Proper Review:
My interpretation of it made me cry so much:
Catra is hell bent fixated on a thougth, a prayer, cycles, repetition
We see that she is all out violently plowing anything in her path, doing what she believes is right
" but she doesn’t see endings. no. a small, shrivelled part of her tries not to"
Her mind is broken
"she dreams of gold hair and blue eyes and whispers under blankets promising futures that should have come. she dreams of soft lips and warm smiles and hands that held the secrets of the whole entire universe in them. everything comes back."
"everything comes back."
The whole narrative is her mind, fighting with itself, and the words "there are no endings" repeated over and over again.
She lets the sun observe, judge and decide what it all means, she is no longer important, she just wants to keep destroying, there has to be a cycle, the cycle is just around the corner, everythign will repeat again.
"there are no endings, even when she looks at adora square in the eye and turns her back on her-"
-one final time.
Catra killed her, and she snapped, she lost everything, and just keeps going cause, she will find Adora again, somehow , she knows she will find Adora again if she keeps doing this.
That broke me :<
Well perhaps its too much of a downer concept, and for this to be extended i guess Adora is not dead, but i think itll still make for a very angsty sad fic, which I LOVE so much too :D
My interpretation of it made me cry so much:
Catra is hell bent fixated on a thougth, a prayer, cycles, repetition
We see that she is all out violently plowing anything in her path, doing what she believes is right
" but she doesn’t see endings. no. a small, shrivelled part of her tries not to"
Her mind is broken
"she dreams of gold hair and blue eyes and whispers under blankets promising futures that should have come. she dreams of soft lips and warm smiles and hands that held the secrets of the whole entire universe in them. everything comes back."
"everything comes back."
The whole narrative is her mind, fighting with itself, and the words "there are no endings" repeated over and over again.
She lets the sun observe, judge and decide what it all means, she is no longer important, she just wants to keep destroying, there has to be a cycle, the cycle is just around the corner, everythign will repeat again.
"there are no endings, even when she looks at adora square in the eye and turns her back on her-"
-one final time.
Catra killed her, and she snapped, she lost everything, and just keeps going cause, she will find Adora again, somehow , she knows she will find Adora again if she keeps doing this.
That broke me :<
Well perhaps its too much of a downer concept, and for this to be extended i guess Adora is not dead, but i think itll still make for a very angsty sad fic, which I LOVE so much too :D
Is this Trainspotting at Etheria? º-º
I have to confess at first, everything seemed way off and felt a bit jarring, but it soon picks up and i knew what was happening,
I want to believe they are drugged out of their asses and they are just seeing flashy colors .. the feeling and emotion unnnh it made me so anxious >w<!!!!!! are they gonna be ok waaaaaah!!!!!
Was it just their imagination? did Catra really Claw off Scropias face :(
if nothing really happened then its all fun , reminded me of "fear and loathing in las vegas" movie
Unless its meant to be really REALLY happening,, Waah thats what woudl get me so Anxious >w<!!!!!!!!!
Also made me think fondly of Sealab 2021 Stimutacs episode LOL!!!!! <3
I have to confess at first, everything seemed way off and felt a bit jarring, but it soon picks up and i knew what was happening,
I want to believe they are drugged out of their asses and they are just seeing flashy colors .. the feeling and emotion unnnh it made me so anxious >w<!!!!!! are they gonna be ok waaaaaah!!!!!
Was it just their imagination? did Catra really Claw off Scropias face :(
if nothing really happened then its all fun , reminded me of "fear and loathing in las vegas" movie
Unless its meant to be really REALLY happening,, Waah thats what woudl get me so Anxious >w<!!!!!!!!!
Also made me think fondly of Sealab 2021 Stimutacs episode LOL!!!!! <3
PROPER REVIEW:
This one feels like the intro for something big, after so much conflict, after spreading herself too thin, Adora has to do something drastic
Maybe Adora just sees the most logical conclusion is to just get rid of catra? becuase....
It seems her injuires are such, that trasnforming back to adora might kill her, so knowing she is already dead, decides to take Catra with her, its so heartbraking, hold Catra one last time, if she can change or not, they could be together again in death ;/
I know i look too deep into things, but seeing it like that REALLY hit me hard.
Tho if this was to coninue, then they probably are going places for Adventure!! , Does she grab Catra and take her off to Eternia? lol?
This one feels like the intro for something big, after so much conflict, after spreading herself too thin, Adora has to do something drastic
Maybe Adora just sees the most logical conclusion is to just get rid of catra? becuase....
It seems her injuires are such, that trasnforming back to adora might kill her, so knowing she is already dead, decides to take Catra with her, its so heartbraking, hold Catra one last time, if she can change or not, they could be together again in death ;/
I know i look too deep into things, but seeing it like that REALLY hit me hard.
Tho if this was to coninue, then they probably are going places for Adventure!! , Does she grab Catra and take her off to Eternia? lol?
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