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#21085 · 2
· on Of Shadows and Fire
The sheer pain that Shadow Weaver is put through... It seems to be in the same vein of intense punishment given to victims in Greek mythology. Somewhat fitting ;p

Shadow weaver is truly a weary soul, and this fic does an excellent job of showing just how depraved of a life her actions have lead her to create.
#21083 · 3
· on Awaiting the Next...
MOM says it's MY turn to play with the nuclear warheads!
#21082 · 2
· on Nothing's Gonna Change My World · >>meadows
I love the imagery here... In a good way, it feels like the climax of a much larger fic.

I'd probably have to reread it a couple times to really unpack all of the content here, and I wouldn't be surprised if others would too. I think that's a sign of great authorship.

Keep it up!
#21081 · 1
· on Do You Remember The Last Time You Woke Up? · >>Pascoite
I was hoping someone would do a literal take on "No rest for the weary"... But damn, I didn't expect it to be so visceral.

It's an intense and very well crafted story! I enjoyed how you chose to characterize the Super Pal Trio's psyches when they're pushed to the limit. Your casual narration style also juxtaposed the manic events really well... And the lack of build-up added a spontaneous feeling to Catra's decaying mental state. I think that helped to create a lot of surprising, and memorable moments. Personally, I couldn't get the image of Entrapta swallowing her tooth out of my mind, even while reading the other submissions.

All in all, an excellent fic. I would love to see any other expansions or content you come up with.

(Also, after reading the "Droste effect" on Wikipedia, I appreciated your choice for the name that much more)
#21080 · 1
· on Fire
This one was alright.

Really nice idea, with some fun moments! The reviews above say it best, but besides those, I think the "flow" of the story could have been a bit smoother. Both for the ending scene, and how the dialogue/actions were written.
#21079 · 1
· on everything stays
This one was beautiful.

Stylistically powerful, just the right length and use of prose, with a really interesting interpretation of the theme. I also love how much emotion is blended into the narrative... each line was really well illustrated.

Kudos!
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