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I really liked the language and diction of this one. The fantasy and magic really felt so wonderful and your fae narrator has such a lively voice.
Parts of this held a good sort of cheesy familiarity, and I'm always glad to see first person. There was a lot of good action and fun in this.
Oh my god, this... fuck, I want more.
Also, curious how the needle would have gotten there.
Also, curious how the needle would have gotten there.