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I would feel actually disrespectful trying to critique this. Not because it's a flawless construction - it's not, although there's not much there to poke at and it's very well put together. Because it would feel as inappropriate as if I were standing in a graveyard criticising the styling of the headstones.
I wasn't aware that was a feeling that could be conveyed in text.
Well done.
I wasn't aware that was a feeling that could be conveyed in text.
Well done.