¡Vamonos! El teléfono es diferente al fondo. Puedes hacerlo mejor que eso.

In the words of 007Ben,
Achievement Unlocked: Art-ification (Have an artist create a picture of your fic at least once.)

I'm not so sure how to name the achievement, but just had to do this. You've made my day, artist!

Okay. I'm done being an excited puppy now. Here's for the actual review!

I like the ice in the background (if that's what you were going for) kinda trippy. I also see the red light flashing at the top and reflecting off the surface of the ice. Nice touch.

As for the phone, It doesn't look cold. It looks like it's warm. Given the fact that it could've been in Cole's pocket the entire time, I give you a pass on that one. Or maybe a couple frosty fingerprints or smudges on the screen for that matter.

That's my 2 cents.

All in all, thank you for arting! I've enjoyed it overall!

This is a really simple piece, but with a lot of tonal connotations. I like how the cell phone is perfectly aligned with our frame of reference, which makes it seem all the more stark and noteworthy. And I really like that the only splash of non-grey/black-ish color is the red notification light. Overall, even though it comes across as kind of plain, it's the kind of piece that works well in retrospect of the story.

Thanks for arting!