I asked, could I write
A haiku with fifteen words,
A watered-down poem.

Alas, I was one word short.
So now this is a tanka.

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[quote]Sillier Version[/quote]
I asked, could I write
A haiku with fifteen words,
A watered-down poem.

Alas, I was one word short.
Real tanka hours, who's up?