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It Could Have Gone Better · FiM Minific ·
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Confused unicorn Applejack is confused. And Applejack colored.
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The lines are deceptively simple, but the facial expression that's conveyed is strong and is also pure gold. It's got a little bit of a Warner Brothers or Looney Tunes cartoon feel to me, with the simplified yet expressively exaggerated eyes. Liked it very much!
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This is very cute.

The medium used here, (I'm going to assume it's a marker, maybe brush tipped? A Tombow? Artistloft?) is used well on certain portions. I can see the change in lineweight in the hair and her hoof.

One thing though, the part that should be more of a major subject in the image, is the horn. Her horn here is somewhat easy to miss with a glance. If it were larger and maybe if the focus of the image was oriented differently, it would be more prominent. Otherwise it's hard to understand what the image is 'about.'

The image is very cute though.
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A nice little simple sketch. The Artist is in command of the lines here, instead of just tossing them around and hoping the right line will fall in the middle somewhere.
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>>Roseluck
(I'm going to assume it's a marker, maybe brush tipped? A Tombow? Artistloft?)

close! Sakura Pigma Brush.

One thing though, the part that should be more of a major subject in the image, is the horn. Her horn here is somewhat easy to miss with a glance. If it were larger and maybe if the focus of the image was oriented differently, it would be more prominent. Otherwise it's hard to understand what the image is 'about.'

This is a really good point, and I didn't notice it myself at first. After reading your comment I started wondering if I should've left out the horn entirely (and pretend it's an epilogue), which also would've made the drawing stand on its own without the story for context.