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It Could Have Gone Better · FiM Minific ·
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I honestly love this LOL the :D face is perfect
#2 ·
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That face brought this close to my favorite of this artist’s entries.
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For a second, I thought Twilight was in the helmet, rather than being a reflection on the visor. I think it's because the two lines that depict her neck do end at about the same spot as where the shading lines of the visor end. I hope I'm making sense!

But I have to agree with the other reviewers that her face is perfect. It was an inspired touch to have her mouth dangling out of her face and having her eyes be ever so slightly different shapes. It feels viscerally silly.
#4 ·
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Adorable!
#5 ·
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That’s a cute pone.
#6 · 2
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You’ve got a really cute little Twily face there, artist. If you’d smoothed out the helmet a bit and polished the whole, you’d have a top contender.