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Lightning in a Jar · Original Short Story ·
Organised by RogerDodger
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Art mini-reviews!

This is surprisingly detailed for the MS Paint style it's using, and I think that elevates it somewhat above its simple roots. I love the little detail of the USDA Organic logo and Certified Gluten Free. (Those are virtually legible, which is pretty incredible at the resolution this is at.) A thoroughly straightforward interpretation, but whimsical around the edges.
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Artist, I like that you put some actual effort into the details of this doodle. I do want to note that MS Paint and most other paint apps do have ellipse tools, and drawing a few ellipses as guidelines for your jar would have gone a long way towards improving your sketch. As it is, I do find that the details are undermined by the execution.
#3 ·
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What saves this one is the little details, like the fact it's organic and preservative free. It is also what harms it, because we don't know the purpose of this lightning in a jar. Why buying it? Is it a cleaning product? Something you can eat? I guess it is the latter (unless I'm not aware of some the probably American symbols on the jar), since it's, like I said, organic and preservative free. But since I can't be sure what the use of a lightning in a jar, I'm afraid I can't rank this really high.